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I think that my ideal family structure consists of dad,mom,2 kids. First, parents are essential to the family. If parents do not exist, children must be in danger. And, I think that only one kid can feel lonely. That was my experience. And then, many restaurant set their menu called \'family set\' for four people. So I think 4 is the best structure.
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Hello, [이름] U!
Thanks for your well comprehended answers, you made a good point!
Anyway, see you later in our class! :D
-T.Jhozel
I think that my ideal family structure consists of dad,mom,2 kids.
>> My ideal family structure consists of a father, a mother, and two children.
First, parents are essential to the family.
>> First and foremost, parents are important to their families.
If parents do not exist, children must be in danger.
>>Correct.
And, I think that only one kid can feel lonely.
>> Correct
>> OR: And, in my opinion, only one child can be lonely.
That was my experience. And then, many restaurant set their menu called \'family set\' for four people.
>> Correct!
So I think 4 is the best structure.
>> Correct!
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