I think
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I think aging has benefit that we can become wise. Getting older, most people gain a lot of experience. And then, that experience can be a sign of life. Sometimes, we listen what old people says. And we know that their advice often right. That is amazing.
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Hello, [이름] U!
Thank you for taking the time to do your homework. Yes, you are correct; there are numerous advantages to aging! :D
Anyway, see you later in our class! :D
-T.Jhozel
I think aging has benefit that we can become wise.
>> I believe that aging has the advantage of making us wiser.
Getting older, most people gain a lot of experience.
>> Most people gain a lot of experience as they grow older.
And then, that experience can be a sign of life.
>> Correct!
OR >> Then that experience can be interpreted as a sign of life.
OR >> Then that experience can be interpreted as a sign of life.
Sometimes, we listen what old people says.
>> Sometimes we listen to what the elderly say.
And we know that their advice often right.
>> Correct!
OR >> And we know that their advice is usually correct.
OR >> And we know that their advice is usually correct.
That is amazing.
>> Correct!
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