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2014-04-23 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I think It depands on situations. I'm more talkative with whom I want to talk. but, When I have to stay or spend a time with whom I don' want to talk, I become innative. the type of people whom I don't want to talk are various. Arogant person is the worst case I don't want to confrontate specially. That kinds of people talk as if they already knew all logic of world, operations or something. and they don't admit their 'not-correct- knowledge' that they already learn from others or book. because of their pride, they ruin their talking habit furthermore they ruin their relationship with other people.

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Good evening [이름]! Happy mid-week! Wow! I also hate those kinds of people.It is difficult to handle a conversation with a boastful person. You were able to express yourself though, kindly check on the words that you used. If you have any questions, ask me in class. Please go over the corrections I provided for you. Teacher Nina   I think It depands on situations. >> I think it depends on the situation.I\'m more talkative with whom I want to talk. >> Correct >> OR: I\'m more conversant with the person who I want to talk to. but, When I have to stay or spend a time with whom I don\' want to talk, I become innative. >> But when I have stay or spend some time with whom I don\'t want to talk to, I become introvert.the type of people whom I don\'t want to talk are various. >> Did you mean: The type of people whom I don\'t want to talk to are different. >> OR: The people whom I don\'t want to talk to are different.   Arogant person is the worst case I don\'t want to confrontate specially. >> Did you mean: An arrogant person is the worst person, I don\'t want to have a conversation with. That kinds of people talk as if they already knew all logic of world, operations or something. >> Did you mean: Those kinds of people talk as if they already know all the logic about the world, operations and so on. and they don\'t admit their \'not-correct- knowledge\' that they already learn from others or book. >> Did you mean: And they don\'t admit their mistakes that they already learned from others or book.because of their pride, they ruin their talking habit furthermore they ruin their relationship with other people. >> Because of their pride, they ruin the conversation and their relationship with other people.

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