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2014-05-15 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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The quality of worker's life is better than student's. Of course there are many type of students in the world. In my experience, I was such a good student. All I do and I can do was studying. but the life of worker is different. Worker can choose their own choice. but the most important and different thing is earning money. Yeah~~!! I can buy what I want. I can spend my time studying and playing soccer and so on. occupation is important and student can't not be an occupation.

강사 첨삭

Good day [이름]! Happy fourth day of the week!Thank you for sending this today. I am so happy that you are becoming more conscious with your sentences and vocabularies.Keep it up! Let us talk more about this later in class. See you! Have a nice day! Teacher Nina   The quality of worker\'s life is better than student\'s. >> The quality of life of workers are better than students. Of course there are many type of students in the world. >> Correct! In my experience, I was such a good student. >> Correct! All I do and I can do was studying. >> All I did was to study.but the life of worker is different. >> But the life of a worker is different. Worker can choose their own choice. >> A worker can make a choice. >> OR: A worker can choose what they want to do. but the most important and different thing is earning money. Yeah~~!! >> Correct! I can buy what I want. >> Correct! I can spend my time studying and playing soccer and so on. >> Correct! >> OR: I can spend time studying, playing soccer and so on. occupation is important and student can\'t not be an occupation. >> Did you mean: Occupation is important but being a student can\'t be an occupation.

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