I think...
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The quality of worker's life is better than student's.
Of course there are many type of students in the world.
In my experience, I was such a good student.
All I do and I can do was studying.
but the life of worker is different.
Worker can choose their own choice. but the most important and different thing is
earning money. Yeah~~!!
I can buy what I want.
I can spend my time studying and playing soccer and so on.
occupation is important and student can't not be an occupation.
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Teacher Nina
The quality of worker\'s life is better than student\'s.
>> The quality of life of workers are better than students. Of course there are many type of students in the world.
>> Correct! In my experience, I was such a good student.
>> Correct! All I do and I can do was studying.
>> All I did was to study.but the life of worker is different.
>> But the life of a worker is different. Worker can choose their own choice.
>> A worker can make a choice.
>> OR: A worker can choose what they want to do.
but the most important and different thing is earning money. Yeah~~!!
>> Correct! I can buy what I want.
>> Correct! I can spend my time studying and playing soccer and so on.
>> Correct!
>> OR: I can spend time studying, playing soccer and so on. occupation is important and student can\'t not be an occupation.
>> Did you mean: Occupation is important but being a student can\'t be an occupation.
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