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Hi TOM!
Thank you so much for an outstanding performance this week.

I know that you are really doing your best to compose meaningful sentences.

Keep up the good work. You are right, we should also take a rest after work/ school. 

Yes, I heard about him. He died because of fatigue and addiction to pain killers.

Thanks for sharing this information. I hope that you will have enough rest this weekend.

Looking forward to hear more ideas and stories next week.

Have fun with your family.

Teacher Nina

I think we should have empty scedule.

>> I think we should have an empty schedule. ( spelling check: schedule ^^)
We need to take a rest and sleep for a long time.

>> correct

>> We need to have enough rest and sleep for almost eight hours a day.
Hartd scedule can kill persom.

>> Did you mean: Hectic schedule can kill a person. ( spelling check: hectic and person.)
In fact,Famous wrestling player Eddie Guererro died because of the stress from full scedule.

>> In fact, a famous wrestling player named Eddie Guererro died because of too much stress.

>> In fact, a famous wrestling player named Eddie Guererro died of stress because of having a hectic schedule.