I think animal test is illegal.

2020-06-08 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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I wnat to say \'animal testing is illegal.\' sometimes I think about animal testing. when I phurchase cosmetic and some other goods which using on my body. officially, I disagree with animal tesitng. but we need to research about side effect. some people say that we can testing throught plant or other thing as not alive. but that doesen\'t make a sentences. we have similar metabolism with animal, not plant. so we can\\\'t avoid animal testing I also think animals are a life . we should respect and care them. I hope to find solution as soon as possibe we can. Animals aren\\\'t doll for us and they should live their own life. we also should live with animal as community. They didn\\\'t any bad things to us, just give love for us. Absolutely they don\\\'t need to be taseted by human being. Thank you for reading my story so far.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]-Li! ^_^
Good evening! Sadly, it\'s Monday again. kkk.
How are you today? Thank you for taking the time to write a beautiful essay for this topic.
I absolutely agree that animal testing shouldn\'t be done because they have feelings like we do too.
Sometimes I think they\'re even more humane than we are.
Anyhow, please keep on writing. I love reading your essay. :)
See you in class later. ^_^

~Charry


I wnat to say \'animal testing is illegal.\'
>>
I want to say \'animal testing is illegal.\'
sometimes I think about animal testing.

>> Sometimes,  I think about animal testing.
when I phurchase cosmetic and some other goods which using on my body.
>> I think about it when I
purchase cosmetics and some other goods which I use on my body.
officially, I disagree with animal tesitng.

>> I officially disagree with animal testing.

but we need to research about side effect.

>> But we need to research about side effects.
some people say that we can testing throught plant or other thing as not alive.
>> S
ome people say that we can test throught plants or other things that are not alive.
but that doesen\'t make a sentences.

>> But that doesn\'t make any sense.
we have similar metabolism with animal, not plant.
>> W
e have similar metabolism with animals, not plants.
so we can\\\'t avoid animal testing 

>> So, we can\'t avoid animal testing.
I also think animals are a life . we should respect and care them.

>> I also think animals are living things. We should respect and care for them. 
I hope to find solution as soon as possibe we can.
>> I hope to find solutions as soon as possible. 

OR >> I hope to find solutions as soon as we can.
Animals aren\\\'t doll for us and they should live their own life.

>> [Do you mean]: Animals aren\'t dolls for us to play with and they deserve to live peacefully.
we also should live with animal as community.

>> We should also live with animals as a community.
They didn\\\'t any bad things to us, just give love for us.

>> They didn\'t do anything bad to us and just give us love.
Absolutely they don\\\'t need to be taseted by human being.
>> They absolutely shouldn\'t be tested by human beings.
Thank you for reading my story so far.

>> Thank you for reading my essay so far.

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