I think animal test is illegal.
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Hi, [이름]-Li! ^_^
Good evening! Sadly, it\'s Monday again. kkk.
How are you today? Thank you for taking the time to write a beautiful essay for this topic.
I absolutely agree that animal testing shouldn\'t be done because they have feelings like we do too.
Sometimes I think they\'re even more humane than we are.
Anyhow, please keep on writing. I love reading your essay. :)
See you in class later. ^_^
~Charry
I wnat to say \'animal testing is illegal.\'
>> I want to say \'animal testing is illegal.\'
sometimes I think about animal testing.
>> Sometimes, I think about animal testing.
when I phurchase cosmetic and some other goods which using on my body.
>> I think about it when I purchase cosmetics and some other goods which I use on my body.
officially, I disagree with animal tesitng.
>> I officially disagree with animal testing.
but we need to research about side effect.
>> But we need to research about side effects.
some people say that we can testing throught plant or other thing as not alive.
>> Some people say that we can test throught plants or other things that are not alive.
but that doesen\'t make a sentences.
>> But that doesn\'t make any sense.
we have similar metabolism with animal, not plant.
>> We have similar metabolism with animals, not plants.
so we can\\\'t avoid animal testing
>> So, we can\'t avoid animal testing.
I also think animals are a life . we should respect and care them.
>> I also think animals are living things. We should respect and care for them.
I hope to find solution as soon as possibe we can.
>> I hope to find solutions as soon as possible.
OR >> I hope to find solutions as soon as we can.
Animals aren\\\'t doll for us and they should live their own life.
>> [Do you mean]: Animals aren\'t dolls for us to play with and they deserve to live peacefully.
we also should live with animal as community.
>> We should also live with animals as a community.
They didn\\\'t any bad things to us, just give love for us.
>> They didn\'t do anything bad to us and just give us love.
Absolutely they don\\\'t need to be taseted by human being.
>> They absolutely shouldn\'t be tested by human beings.
Thank you for reading my story so far.
>> Thank you for reading my essay so far.
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