I think art is imitation of human life.
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Art is things what we regard as beautiful.
>> Art is something that we regard as beautiful.
Life have to be sucessful when we saw from future.
>> Life has to be successful in the future.
Is this expression all right?
>> CORRECT
I mean I must success in my life.
>> I mean, I must have a successful life.
Am I dare to add a comment today\'s question that I can play the violin.
>> This is off-topic, but I can play the violin.
I am playing smart phone these days.
>> I play smartphones these days.
If you ask me to the reason I will answer that it is enough to enjoy the life.
>> If you ask me the reason, I will just answer that is it enough for me to enjoy my life.
Thanks for reading.
>> CORRECT
I am worried about my English composition.
>> CORRECT
Sorry.
Then bye.
>> Sorry and good bye.
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