I think art is imitation of human life.

2018-11-29 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

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Art is things what we regard as beautiful. Life have to be sucessful when we saw from future. Is this expression all right? I mean I must success in my life. Am I dare to add a comment today's question that I can play the violin. I am playing smart phone these days. If you ask me to the reason I will answer that it is enough to enjoy the life. Thanks for reading. I am worried about my English composition. Sorry. Then bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Wee!

Thank you so much for doing your homework ^^

I hope you are having a great night ☺


Art is things what we regard as beautiful.
>> Art is something that we regard as beautiful.


Life have to be sucessful when we saw from future.
>> Life has to be successful in the future.


Is this expression all right?
>> CORRECT


I mean I must success in my life.

>> I mean, I must have a successful life.


Am I dare to add a comment today\'s question that I can play the violin.

>> This is off-topic, but I can play the violin.


I am playing smart phone these days. 

>> I play smartphones these days.


If you ask me to the reason I will answer that it is enough to enjoy the life.  

>> If you ask me the reason, I will just answer that is it enough for me to enjoy my life.


Thanks for reading.

>> CORRECT


I am worried about my English composition.

>> CORRECT


Sorry.
Then bye.

>> Sorry and good bye.

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