.I think blinddate is not good for everyone.

2014-04-24 · 첨삭 강사 ali

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I think blinddate is not good for everyone. Yes, there are many people who get real benefit from it. One of my friends had a blinddate and they have been couple. the girl who is my friend's girlfriend is very beautiful. So I want to meet a girl who is pretty. In doing one's job, If there is a big dream, and there will be a big disappointment. Yes I had a big dream and I was also very disappointed. My disappointment was continued until further 3 more times. What I want to tell you is, it is very hard to meet someone who exactly match with your imagination. It is better way to meet someone "accidentally" like a destiny. 2 years later, finally I and Carolyn met like accidentally. and we believe it is our destiny.

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I think blinddate is not good for everyone.

>> I think blind date is not good for everyone.
Yes, there are many people who get real benefit from it.

>> Did you mean: Yes, there are many people who get a real benefit from it.
One of my friends had a blinddate and they have been couple.

>> One of my friends had a blind date and they became a couple.
the girl who is my friend\'s girlfriend is very beautiful.

>> Correct
So I want to meet a girl who is pretty.

>> Correct

In doing one\'s job, If there is a big dream, and there will be a big disappointment.

>> Did you mean: In doing one\'s job, if there is a big dream and there will also be a big disappointment.

Yes I had a big dream and I was also very disappointed.

>> Correct
My disappointment was continued until further 3 more times.

>> My disappointment continued for three months.

>> OR: I was disappointed three times.

What I want to tell you is, it is very hard to meet someone who exactly match with your imagination.

>> Did you mean: What I want to tell you is, it is very hard to meet someone who exactly matches your imagination.

>> OR: What I want to tell you is, it is very hard to meet someone who will meet your standards.
It is better way to meet someone \"accidentally\" like a destiny.

>> It is better to meet someone by accident like destiny.

>> OR: It is better to meet someone accidentally.

2 years later, finally
I and Carolyn met like accidentally. and we believe it is our destiny.

>> Two years later, Carolyn and I met accidentally and we believe it\'s our destiny.

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