I think both of them is important for our work
학생이 쓴 원문
I can\'t get to rate two of thing with experience and training causing we need two thing when we always work on our workplace
so than The best is having a 50% and 50% each other
It is seem like need and thread so you\'d better to have a both of them for your development
I think that having a balance is very important about all of our work
강사 첨삭
Hey, [이름]. Thank you for your feedback on the homework topic. Yes, it is very difficult to choose one of the two. One without the other would cause an imbalance and keep us from growing personally. Have a wonderful evening. ~Teacher Jane c\",)
Q: What do you think is more \"important\" for you in your work - the training you have or the experience you have? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
I can\'t get to rate two of thing with experience and training causing we need two thing when we always work on our workplace
>> I cannot rate the two because we need both experience and training because we always need those at work.
so than The best is having a 50% and 50% each other
>> So the best is to have fifty percent of each.
It is seem like need and thread so you\'d better to have a both of them for your development
>> It is like having a needle and thread that you had better have both for your own development.
I think that having a balance is very important about all of our work
>> I think that having a balance is very important at work.
Q: What do you think is more \"important\" for you in your work - the training you have or the experience you have? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
I can\'t get to rate two of thing with experience and training causing we need two thing when we always work on our workplace
>> I cannot rate the two because we need both experience and training because we always need those at work.
so than The best is having a 50% and 50% each other
>> So the best is to have fifty percent of each.
It is seem like need and thread so you\'d better to have a both of them for your development
>> It is like having a needle and thread that you had better have both for your own development.
I think that having a balance is very important about all of our work
>> I think that having a balance is very important at work.
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