I think dogs are more loyal.
학생이 쓴 원문
In terms of knowledge, experience, quick response and speed, humans are superior, but in terms of loyalty, dogs are super. Humans are not simple, they are more meticulous and complex than dogs, so they can betray their owners at any time. Of course, depending on the position of the owner, there is a difference in whether dog betrays him or not, but the fact that they can betray and leave at any time will not change. Dogs, of course, have feeling and thought, but they are simple and less complex than humans. When properly trained like a police dog, you can develop such a loyal, coping ability, speed, and attentiveness to the best of its ability, more then humans. In conclusion, I think dogs are more loyal.
강사 첨삭
Hi Maria!
Nothing compares to the love and trust that pets give us. When human beings betray us, our pets never will. Until death, like in the movie Hachico, the pet stayed and waited at the bus station even when his owner died.
Well, it doesn\'t mean however that we cannot trust people anymore. Of course, there are trustworthy friends we can find but they are rare. So choose your friends carefully. Someday when you decide to have a pet, love them the way you want them to love you.
Well done! See you.
-T. Donna =)
In terms of knowledge, experience, quick response and speed, humans are superior, but in terms of loyalty, dogs are super.
>> Correct!
Humans are not simple, they are more meticulous and complex than dogs, so they can betray their owners at any time.
>> Correct!
Of course, depending on the position of the owner, there is a difference in whether dog betrays him or not, but the fact that they can betray and leave at any time will not change.
>> Correct!
Dogs, of course, have feeling and thought, but they are simple and less complex than humans.
>> Dogs, of course, have feelings and thoughts, but they are simple and less complex than humans.
When properly trained like a police dog, you can develop such a loyal, coping ability, speed, and attentiveness to the best of its ability, more then humans.
>> Correct!
In conclusion, I think dogs are more loyal.
>> Correct!
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