I think everyone has a choice
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There\'s a lot of controversy over this news in Korea.
It\'s die of covid 19 vaccine.
One day, very healthy person suddenly dead.
Everyone don\'t know why healthy person\'s dead reason.
But a few days before dead person got the vaccine.
There are many cases of like this.
And I can\'t reccomend getting a vaccine.
Just it\'s for free I think everyone has a choice.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ann:)
I think you are correct at some point. We have our right to choose whether to have it or not but there would always be consequences.
There\'s a lot of controversy over this news in Korea.
>> There\'s a lot of controversy over this news in South Korea.
It\'s die of covid 19 vaccine.
>> It is many people dying from the COVID-19 vaccine.
One day, very healthy person suddenly dead.
>> One day, a very healthy person suddenly died because of it.
Everyone don\'t know why healthy person\'s dead reason.
>> No one knows the reason why that person died.
But a few days before dead person got the vaccine.
>> But a few days before, he got the vaccine.
There are many cases of like this.
>> CORRECT
And I can\'t reccomend getting a vaccine.
>> That is why I don\'t recommend getting the vaccine.
Just it\'s for free I think everyone has a choice.
>> It should just be a personal choice instead.
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