I think fairy tales is better to me.
학생이 쓴 원문
Actually, in a fairy tales there is a magic, fairy, full of good clothes, and jewels, so it can be good for me, and good for everyone. In a fairy tales, we can be a princess, we can be a fairy, and we can be a King, and Queen too! We can be anyting! Of course, the reality is important. We have to face reality, but we don\'t have to rely too much on fairy tales.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Maria!
It is true that fantasy or fairy tales can be fun but we can actually use this to make our real lives better. We can make fantasy a reality by creating our own happily ever after.
Thanks for another very good composition!
See you tomorrow.
-T. Donna =)
>> Actually, in a fairy tale there is magic, fairy, it is full of good clothes and jewels. So it can be good for me and good for everyone.
In a fairy tales, we can be a princess, we can be a fairy, and we can be a King, and Queen too! We can be anyting!
>> In a fairy tale, we can be a princess, we can be a fairy, and we can be a king and Queen too! We can be anything!
Of course, the reality is important. We have to face reality, but we don\'t have to rely too much on fairy tales.
>> Correct!
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