I think I don\'t have any bad habit to be pointed specipically.

2019-06-24 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

학생이 쓴 원문

I have my own personality. I am often heard that I am speechless and I had a white skin when I was young by womens. We are all having a various personality. These days the rain is pouring time by time. I think I can\'t handle the money well. Thanks for reading. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Wee~

Thanks for doing your homework ^^

I hope you are having a great night ♥

I have my own personality.
>> CORRECT

I am often heard that I am speechless and I had a white skin when I was young by womens.
>> I often hear women say that I am speechless and that I have fair skin when I was young.

We are all having a various personality.
>> We all have various personalities.

These days the rain is pouring time by time.
>> It\'s rainy nowadays.

I think I can\'t handle the money well.
>> CORRECT

Thanks for reading.
Bye.

>> CORRECT

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