I think I haven\'t yet gained any of aims that I have planned.
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello, Wee!
Thank you so much for doing your homework.
I hope you are having a great night ☺
I bought some books related to test which is held regularly for the making money.
>> I bought some books related to the test which will be held regularly.
I will study hard with that book and I will aside my english study for a while for the success of national test.
>> I will study hard with that book and I will set aside my English study for a while for the success of my national test.
But this time with you is also precious, too.
>> However, this time with you is precious, too.
And in the summer days when it is so hot I will train my music skill using violin.
>> Also in the summer days, when it\'s hot, I will also practice the violin.
All this thing is my goal which I have planned in these days.
>> Those things are my goal which I have planned.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
>> CORRECT
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