I think I haven\'t yet gained any of aims that I have planned.

2019-02-26 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

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I bought some books related to test which is held regularly for the making money. I will study hard with that book and I will aside my english study for a while for the success of national test. But this time with you is also precious, too. And in the summer days when it is so hot I will train my music skill using violin. All this thing is my goal which I have planned in these days. Thanks for reading. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Wee!

Thank you so much for doing your homework.

I hope you are having a great night ☺


I bought some books related to test which is held regularly for the making money.

>> I bought some books related to the test which will be held regularly.


I will study hard with that book and I will aside my english study for a while for the success of national test.

>> I will study hard with that book and I will set aside my English study for a while for the success of my national test.


But this time with you is also precious, too.

>> However, this time with you is precious, too.


And in the summer days when it is so hot I will train my music skill using violin.

>> Also in the summer days, when it\'s hot, I will also practice the violin.


All this thing is my goal which I have planned in these days.

>> Those things are my goal which I have planned.


Thanks for reading.
Bye.

>> CORRECT

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