I think I\'m a good friend to my friends

2021-01-08 · 첨삭 강사 Donna

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Actually, on December 23, I ran for vice school president election, but I failed. I was a vice school president in a elementary school. I did hard, so I can be. I don\'t know why I failed in middle school, but I do a best, so I don\'t be disapointed my self. Now, I\'m a not a class president, also not a vice school president, but I\'m doing a best by just a middle school of student. I don\'t know now my friends thinking about me, but I think I\'m a good friend to my friends~^^

강사 첨삭

Happy Friday Maria!

Being a student alone has a lot of responsibilities so when you became the vice president in your elementary school, I am sure that you had a busy time doing extra work for your class. Well, the right time will come for you to be the next president in your middle school. That needs a lot of work and studying. So always do your best just like in our class. 

Thank you for sharing to me this answer. I am really proud of you and your achievement.

-T. Donna =)

Actually, on December 23, I ran for vice school president election, but I failed. 
>> Correct!

I was a vice school president in a elementary school. I did hard, so I can be. 
>> I was the vice president in the elementary school and I worked so hard so I can be in that position.

I don\'t know why I failed in middle school, but I do a best, so I don\'t be disapointed my self. 
>> I don\'t know why I failed in middle school, but I do my best, so I don\'t get disappointed with my self. 

Now, I\'m a not a class president, also not a vice school president, but I\'m doing a best by just a middle school of student. 
>> Now, I\'m a not a class president, also not a vice school president, but I\'m doing my best by just being a middle school student. 

I don\'t know now my friends thinking about me, but I think I\'m a good friend to my friends~^^
>> I don\'t know now how my friends think about me, but I think I\'m a good friend to my friends.

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