I think I’m rich
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes. I think I\'m rich. Actually, I\'m not rich now, but I think I can be rich when I grow up. This is because I write a pocket money diary and plan and write when I spend money while diligently saving money. Of course, sometimes I make impulse purchases. However, on the day I make an impulse purchase, I write a pocket money diary, reflect, and plan to spend less money. I think if I keep doing this, I can become rich later.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
Yes. I think I\'m rich. Actually, I\'m not rich now, but I think I can be rich when I grow up.
>>> CORRECT!
This is because I write a pocket money diary and plan and write when I spend money while diligently saving money.
>>> CORRECT!
Of course, sometimes I make impulse purchases.
>>> CORRECT!
However, on the day I make an impulse purchase, I write a pocket money diary, reflect, and plan to spend less money.
>>> CORRECT!
I think if I keep doing this, I can become rich later.
>>> CORRECT!
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