I think i will try to tell about today's happening " A Russian man with a big foot"

2012-12-28 · 첨삭 강사 Alice

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Today was a rather special for us becasue too many foreigners had come and gone to our office. Of courese, It was me that could serve them in English. Among many happenings in my office, let me try to tell about a man with a big foot. During my worktime, a strange and notable ( on a second thought, I think it was utterly because of his tall over 2m) man came to me asking about his shoes size. Maybe he said like this..."um...I borrowed more bigger shoes than i have...this one...yesterday (showing me his ski boots with 30.5 size that was the biggest one we had), so he wanted more bigger size. However, as soon as i saw him I was embarrased by his tall and rather tough apperance. Anyhow, after short period of time, i could come to consciousness soon. (Skipping) Finally, I couldn't help him in any options. Despite of my lack of English ability, I leaved there leaving a word " Thank you friend, See you tomorrow, we will come here for five days...)

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!^^ What an experience you had today! Was it really 30.5 size? Like how much is that when converted to centimeters? I am so curious with that foot size. Hahaha! What is his nationality? We\'ll talk about this later, [이름]. See you!^^ ~ Teacher Alice Today was a rather special for us becasue too many foreigners had come and gone to our office. >> Correct! Of courese, It was me that could serve them in English. >> Of course, it was only me who could assist them in English. Among many happenings in my office, let me try to tell about a man with a big foot. >> Among the many happenings in my office, let me try to tell you about a man with a big foot. During my worktime, a strange and notable (on a second thought, I think it was utterly because of his tall over 2m) man came to me asking about his shoes size. > >During my worktime, a strange and notable (on a second thought, I think it was utterly because of his height of over 2 meters) man came to me asking about his shoe size.Maybe he said like this...\"um...I borrowed more bigger shoes than i have...this one...yesterday (showing me his ski boots with 30.5 size that was the biggest one we had), so he wanted more bigger size. >> Maybe he said like this...\"Um...I borrowed much bigger shoes than I have...this one...yesterday (showing me his ski boots with 30.5 size that was the biggest one we had), so he wanted much bigger size. However, as soon as i saw him I was embarrased by his tall and rather tough apperance. >> However, as soon as I saw him, I was embarrased by his tall height and rather tough appearance. Anyhow, after short period of time, i could come to consciousness soon. >> Anyhow, after a short period of time, I could come to consciousness soon. (Skipping) Finally, I couldn\'t help him in any options. >> Correct! Despite of my lack of English ability, I leaved there leaving a word \" Thank you friend, See you tomorrow, we will come here for five days...) >> Despite my lack of English ability, I left there hearing a word, \"Thank you friend. See you tomorrow. We will visit here for five days.\"

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