I think internet have a two face
학생이 쓴 원문
internet isn\'t always a good effect to our life. but the other side they have a good thing
for example finding information of helping to get easy lifestyle I mean we can buy something what we want thought internet.
thinking if someone who lived in 1980\'s is come back here light now. that guy really would be surprise all of thing what he is seeing
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름]. It is always good to learn about your thoughts on these topics. I appreciate you sharing your opinions even in class. I do hope you get a good night\'s sleep tonight and I look forward to talking about this topic in one of our classes when the topic comes up. Have a good night and let\'s talk again tomorrow. ~ Teacher Jane c\",)
internet isn\'t always a good effect to our life.
>>> The internet does not always have a good effect on our life.
but the other side they have a good thing
>>> But on the other hand, they have advantages.
for example finding information of helping to get easy lifestyle I mean we can buy something what we want thought internet.
>>> For example, finding information to help make our lives easy like buying something we want through the internet.
thinking if someone who lived in 1980\'s is come back here light now. that guy really would be surprise all of thing what he is seeing
>>> If you think about it, someone who lived in the 1980s would come in this day and age, that guy would really be surprised of all the things he would be seeing.
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