I think internet usage is very beneficial to human.

2019-08-12 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

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Because it is a machine it is very useful in various ways to human\'s life. E-mail is the primary driver toward Internet usage. Internet usage is various from kid to adult. Internet use seems to be popular among children these days. I never dreamed of using the Internet when I was young. Thanks for reading. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Wee!

Thank you for doing your homework.

I hope you\'re having a great night ☺

Because it is a machine it is very useful in various ways to human\'s life.
>> It is very useful to humans.

E-mail is the primary driver toward Internet usage.
>> Internet is the primary driver of the way society accesses and views information.

Internet usage is various from kid to adult.
>> Internet usage depends on the consumer.

Internet use seems to be popular among children these days.
>> CORRECT

I never dreamed of using the Internet when I was young.
>> I\'ve never dreamt of using the internet when I was young.

Thanks for reading.
Bye.

>> CORRECT

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