I think it is better to be a intelligent person.

Hello [이름]!

I like your point of view.

We actually have the same ideas.

You have expressed your thoughts well in this composition.

I want to hear more from you.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

Everyone has own personality.

>> Everyone has his or her own personality.
And people have their own charm.

>> People also have their own charm.
In my case, I like person who are intelligent.

>> In my case, I like people who are intelligent.
This is because attractive appearance will dissapear due to aging.

>> This is because an attractive appearance will dissapear due to aging.
But intelligence will remain until they die.

>> However, people\'s intelligence will remain until they die.
 So, I want to be a intelligent person.

>>  That\'s why I want to be an intelligent person.