I think it\'s almost impossible for human rights are protected.

2023-08-24 · 첨삭 강사 Cathy

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I think it\'s almost impossible for human rights are protected. Because I think if human rights are protected, we should give up our privacy. If we want to protect human rights, I think everyone should wear a microphone and have live cameras everywhere that can be checked at all times.

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Hello Da [이름],

Thank you for doing your homework! I appreciate your effort and dedication. Keep up the good work!

~Teacher Cathy

 

I think it\'s almost impossible for human rights are protected.

>> I think it\'s almost impossible for human rights to be protected.

Because I think if human rights are protected, we should give up our privacy.

>> CORRECT

OR>> I believe that if we safeguard human rights, we might need to let go of our privacy.

If we want to protect human rights, I think everyone should wear a microphone and have live cameras everywhere that can be checked at all times.

>>CORRECT

OR>> To ensure human rights, I think it\'s a good idea if everyone wears a microphone and has live cameras that can be watched all the time.

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