I think it\'s the destruction of the ozone layer.

2023-07-05 · 첨삭 강사 Cathy

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I think it\'s the destruction of the ozone layer. The ozone layer is destroyed, the temperature of the Earth is steadily rising. I think the phenomenon caused by the destruction of the ozone layer is that the weather changes frequently and natural disasters occur a lot. Therefore, I think the biggest environmental problem now is the destruction of the ozone layer.

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Hello Da [이름],

Thank you for doing your homework. I appreciate the effort you put into completing it. Your hard work and dedication are impressive. It\'s clear that you took the time to understand the topics and applied them well in your assignment. By completing your homework, you showed responsibility and a strong commitment to your learning. Your efforts will definitely contribute to your progress in the subject. Keep up the great work and continue approaching your studies with enthusiasm. Your determination will lead to great achievements. I\'m proud to have you as my student.

~Teacher Cathy

 

I think it\'s the destruction of the ozone layer.

>> CORRECT
The ozone layer is destroyed, the temperature of the Earth is steadily rising.

>>The ozone layer is destroyed, and the temperature of the Earth is steadily rising.
I think the phenomenon caused by the destruction of the ozone layer is that the weather changes frequently and natural disasters occur a lot.

>> CORRECT
Therefore, I think the biggest environmental problem now is the destruction of the ozone layer.

>> CORRECT

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