I think It was food poisioning.

2014-11-21 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I think I had some kind of food poisioning. It is often seen in summer time but don't be confident to eat any food on the table even in winter season. I don't have experience to be hospitalized in the past. Let me tell you about my ability to digest food. I had serious digetion problems whenever I ate dairy food, Anyway It is not the case. It was the story about my starveness and trouble. Two month before, I was very hungry because I didn't have any food in my room. To make matter worse, Carolyn went to her hometown. but I decided not to go out because I thought I could overcome the hunger. but I was wrong. I couldn't stand any more, so I try to find anything to eat. Finally I found "Lamyoun" which was expired. At that time I didn't have any time to think rationaly. I just put some hot water on the bowl and ate it. After eating, I felt something in my stomach. Yes, That was it. I got a BiG shot. I was nearly dehydrated.

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름]!

Happy Friday!

I hope that your presentation will be successful.

Oh my god! I\'m sorry to hear about what happened.

You should always be careful.

Check the expiration date before eating something.

Have a fun weekend ahead.

Teacher Nina


I think I had some kind of food poisioning.

>> I think I experienced food poisoning.
It is often seen in summer time but don\'t be confident to eat any food on the table even in winter season.

>> It is often seen in summer time but don\'t be confident to eat any food on the table even in winter.
I don\'t have experience to be hospitalized in the past.

>> I haven\'t been hospitalized yet.
Let me tell you about my ability to digest food.

>> correct
I had serious digetion problems whenever I ate dairy food, Anyway It is not the case.

>> I had a serious digestion problem whenever I eat diary food. Anyway it\'s not always the case.
It was the story about my starveness and trouble. 

>> It is the story about starving and problems.
Two month before, I was very hungry because I didn\'t have any food in my room.

>> Two months ago, I was very hungry because I didn\'t have any food in my room.
To make matter worse, Carolyn went to her hometown.

>> correct

but I decided not to go out because I thought I could overcome the hunger. but I was wrong.

>> But I decided not to go out because I thought I could overcome my hunger, but I was wrong.
I couldn\'t stand any more, so I try to find anything to eat.

>> I wasn\'t able to stand it so, I tried to find something to eat.

>> OR: I wasn\'t able to endure so I tried to find something to eat.
Finally I found \"Lamyoun\" which was expired.

>> Finally, I found \"Lamyoun\" which was expired.

At that time I didn\'t have any time to think rationaly.

>> At that time,  I didn\'t have time to think rationally.

I just put some hot water on the bowl and ate it.

>> correct
After eating, I felt something in my stomach.

>> After eating it, I felt something wrong in my stomach.
Yes, That was it.

>> correct

I got a BiG shot.

>> correct

I was nearly dehydrated.

>> correct

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