I think It was food poisioning.
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Oh my god! I\'m sorry to hear about what happened.
You should always be careful.
Check the expiration date before eating something.
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Teacher Nina
I think I had some kind of food poisioning.
>> I think I experienced food poisoning.
It is often seen in summer time but don\'t be confident to eat any food on the table even in winter season.
>> It is often seen in summer time but don\'t be confident to eat any food on the table even in winter.
I don\'t have experience to be hospitalized in the past.
>> I haven\'t been hospitalized yet.
Let me tell you about my ability to digest food.
>> correct
I had serious digetion problems whenever I ate dairy food, Anyway It is not the case.
>> I had a serious digestion problem whenever I eat diary food. Anyway it\'s not always the case.
It was the story about my starveness and trouble.
>> It is the story about starving and problems.
Two month before, I was very hungry because I didn\'t have any food in my room.
>> Two months ago, I was very hungry because I didn\'t have any food in my room.
To make matter worse, Carolyn went to her hometown.
>> correct
but I decided not to go out because I thought I could overcome the hunger. but I was wrong.
>> But I decided not to go out because I thought I could overcome my hunger, but I was wrong.
I couldn\'t stand any more, so I try to find anything to eat.
>> I wasn\'t able to stand it so, I tried to find something to eat.
>> OR: I wasn\'t able to endure so I tried to find something to eat.
Finally I found \"Lamyoun\" which was expired.
>> Finally, I found \"Lamyoun\" which was expired.
At that time I didn\'t have any time to think rationaly.
>> At that time, I didn\'t have time to think rationally.
I just put some hot water on the bowl and ate it.
>> correct
After eating, I felt something in my stomach.
>> After eating it, I felt something wrong in my stomach.
Yes, That was it.
>> correct
I got a BiG shot.
>> correct
I was nearly dehydrated.
>> correct
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