I think life is all about the life of family.
학생이 쓴 원문
I like playing at the ground with ball.
My family often go out to outskirts of city for refreshment.
But I am too young to drive out alone.
Todays weather is not good for me to go out.
I expect you to teach for me to speak english well.
thanks for reading.
Bye.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Wee!
Thank you for doing your homework ^^
Hope you are having a great night ☺
I like playing at the ground with ball.
>> I like playing with my ball.
My family often go out to outskirts of city for refreshment.
>> My family often go to the outskirts of town for refreshment.
But I am too young to drive out alone.
>> However, I am too young to drive alone.
Todays weather is not good for me to go out.
>> Today\'s weather is not good for me to go out.
I expect you to teach for me to speak english well.
>> I expect you to teach me to speak English well.
thanks for reading.
>> Thanks for reading.
Bye.
>> CORRECT
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