I think my country should be changeed educayion.
학생이 쓴 원문
I think my country should be changed education.
Korea education is cailed teaching by rote.
Every students have to learn answers and explanations.
Aii study is considered subject needing memorizing.
And A lot of people want the first.
The second is a dead loss.
So I think should be changed euducation in my country
강사 첨삭
Hi there!
Thanks for sharing your opinion.
I have heard a lot about your educational system and I also agree that something should be changed about it.
Anyway, let\'s hope that there will be.
See you later!
~T. Jessie~
I think my country should be changed education.
>> I think my country should change its educational system.
Korea education is cailed teaching by rote.
>> Korea\'s education is called teaching by rote.
Every students have to learn answers and explanations.
>> Every student has to learn about answers and explanations.
Aii study is considered subject needing memorizing.
>> All subjects need memorization.
And A lot of people want the first.
>> And a lot of people want the first.
The second is a dead loss.
>> Correct!
So I think should be changed euducation in my country
>> So I think the educational system in my country should be changed.
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