I think my daily life is normal

2023-03-28 · 첨삭 강사 Cathy

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I\'m wake up in the morning 10:30, and I eat early lunch. and I\'m ready for work at 12 o\'clock and I should arrived before at 2 pm so I start to go to my company at 1 pm and I work in 7 pm. and I have two things of my daily life If I have class in day, I go home early and I study for my class. or if I don\'t have class in day, I walk around in my company and I visit a restaurant or visit a karaoke, cafe. of course, I always use a mask! when I go home after play time, I change my close, read a book, talk with my family and I study my lack point

강사 첨삭

Hi Da [이름],

 

A well-executed routine can aid in stress reduction, which in turn can result in improved mental health, more time for relaxation, and less anxiety. Better sleep: Your mental sharpness, emotional well-being, and energy are all affected by routines like your sleep schedule and bedtime routines.

~Teacher Cathy

               

I\'m wake up in the morning 10:30, and I eat early lunch.

>> I wake up at 10:30 in the morning, and I eat my lunch early.

and I\'m ready for work at 12 o\'clock and I should arrived before at 2 pm

>> I’m ready for work at noon and should arrive before 2 pm.

so I start to go to my company at 1 pm and I work in 7 pm.

>> So, I start going to my company at 1 pm and work till 7 pm.

and I have two things of my daily life

>> And I have two things in my daily life.

If I have class in day, I go home early and I study for my class.

>> I go home early and study if I have a class.

or if I don\'t have class in day, I walk around in my company and I visit a restaurant or visit a karaoke, cafe.

>> Or if I don’t have a class, I walk around in my company, visit a restaurant, karaoke or café.

of course, I always use a mask!

>> Of course, I always use a mask!

when I go home after play time, I change my close, read a book, talk with my family

>> When I go home after playtime, I change my clothes, read a book, and talk to my family.

and I study my lack point

>> And I study my low points.

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