I think my friend are enough to good to fashionable.

2019-07-29 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

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I like the fashion in my clothes and many other product that I using now. Fashion is the way that swirls our present time. I always follows that way and enjoys in that way. My friend is all male because I am not yet started to court a girl. All they are fashionable and lives their life well as I know. Thanks for reading. bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Wee!

Thanks for doing your homework!

I hope you are having a great day ☺

I like the fashion in my clothes and many other product that I using now.
>> I like my fashion sense and the other products that I am using now.

Fashion is the way that swirls our present time.
>> Fashion evolves all the time.

I always follows that way and enjoys in that way.
>> I always follow and enjoy it that way.

My friend is all male because I am not yet started to court a girl.
>> My friends are all male and I haven\'t started courting girls yet.

All they are fashionable and lives their life well as I know.
>> All of them are fashionable and they\'re living a good life.

Thanks for reading.
bye.

>> Thanks for reading. Bye.

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