I think of only one

2021-04-22 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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I  think all people need to get vaccinated. Because It vacate my mind of worries. There doesn\'t finish corona virus season. so I check number of corona everday as I have worries of corona. I want to stop this season all poeple don\'t know to solve I think there is only solution but I know this is not 100 percent..

강사 첨삭

Hello Miss [이름]. Thank you for this.

I  think all people need to get vaccinated.

>>> I think all people need to get vaccinated.
Because It vacate my mind of worries.

>>> Because it eases my mind of worries.

>>> OR: Because it relieves my mind of worries.
There doesn\'t finish corona virus season.

>>> The corona virus situation never ends.
so I check number of corona everday as I have worries of corona.

>>> so I check number of corona infections every day as I have worries of corona virus.

I want to stop this season

>>> OR: I what this situation to end.
all poeple don\'t know to solve

>>> All people don\'t know how to solve this.
I think there is only solution but I know this is not 100 percent..

>>> I think there is only one solution but I know this is not 100 percent effective.

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