I think offline class is more benefit to me*^^*

2021-07-27 · 첨삭 강사 Donna

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I think offline is better than online. Let me tell you a few things online. It\'s real! -Mathematics class- *Note: Math teachers are very scary... Teacher: Guys, did you check your attendance? Students: Yes! Teacher: But who is number 28, he didn\'t check attendance right now... Class leader #3 (it\'s me^^): Yes! Teacher! Teacher: Class leader, who is number 28? Number 3: Number 28 is [이름] Gun-woo! Teacher: Call him -After a few minutes- #3: Teacher, [이름] Gun-woo has been contacted! Teacher: We ll done, [이름] Geon-woo replied Number 28: Yes... Teacher: Why are you in here now, what have you been up to? The atmosphere is cloudy, what is this! #28: I\'m sorry, sir...I\'ll try to come in sooner... Teacher: Alright, do your best from now on, let\'s start class. Like this if we do online class it is not easy to come on class at right time, so we can cause teacher\'s angry day....^^;; P.S. Actually it was not my fault, but it was very scary...math class was the first time in that day.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Maria!

I had fun reading this dialogue you have made! It shows how hard it is to conduct online classes as well as how each participant must be accountable for the rest of the members. I guess it is to ensure that all of you are learning so well. I understand why your teacher can be mad so you have to do your part as a team.

Thank you so much for sending me this answer and for clarifying what my question means awhile back, I really appreciate it.

See you again tomorrow! 

-T. Donna =)

-Mathematics class-
*Note: Math teachers are very scary...
>> Correct!

Teacher: Guys, did you check your attendance?
Students: Yes!
>> Correct!

Teacher: But who is number 28, he didn\'t check attendance right now... Class leader
#3 (it\'s me^^): Yes! Teacher!
>> Teacher: But who is number 28, he didn\'t check in for attendance right now... Class leader?

Teacher: Class leader, who is number 28?
Number 3: Number 28 is [이름] Gun-woo!
>> Correct!

Teacher: Call him
-After a few minutes-
#3: Teacher, [이름] Gun-woo has been contacted!
>> Correct!

Teacher: Well done, [이름] Geon-woo replied
Number 28: Yes...
>> Correct! Or: ADD PERIOD AT THE END OF THE SENTENCE.

Teacher: Why are you in here now, what have you been up to? The atmosphere is cloudy, what is this!
#28: I\'m sorry, sir...I\'ll try to come in sooner...
Teacher: Alright, do your best from now on, let\'s start class.
>> Teacher: Why are you here just now, what have you been up to? The atmosphere is cloudy! What is this?

Like this if we do online class it is not easy to come on class at right time, so we can cause teacher\'s angry day....^^;;
>> Like this, if we do online class, it is not easy to come on class at the right time, so it can cause the teacher\'s anger that day.


P.S. Actually it was not my fault, but it was very scary...math class was the first time in that day.
>> P.S. Actually it was not my fault, but it was very scary. Math class is the first class on that day.

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