I think our nation will properous in the future.
학생이 쓴 원문
Today\'s world is changing fast because of technology.
Owing to those factors, our nation would developed as other nations do.
Korea is a nation that is aboudant of water and mountains.
Korea\'s people is homogenious race.
In fact, it is the only divided nation in the world.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
강사 첨삭
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Today\'s world is changing fast because of technology.
>> Our world today is constantly changing because of technology.
>> Our world today is constantly changing because of technology.
Owing to those factors, our nation would developed as other nations do.
>> Owing to those factors, our nation would be as developed as other nations.
>> Owing to those factors, our nation would be as developed as other nations.
Korea is a nation that is aboudant of water and mountains.
>> Korea has abundant water resources.
>> Korea has abundant water resources.
Korea\'s people is homogenious race.
>> Korea is a homogeneous country.
>> Korea is a homogeneous country.
In fact, it is the only divided nation in the world.
>> CORRECT
>> CORRECT
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
Bye.
>> CORRECT
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