I think people go to cafeteria because..

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Thank you for sending this in even though you are tired.

I appreciate your effort for doing a lot of homework.

I have a question, what do you mean by \"repelled\"? 

This word is used as a verb.Can you please explain your sentence in class?

I\'m scared that I was a bit confused. I hope to talk to you again.

Teacher Nina

I think people go to cafeteria to take a rest.

>> Correct!
In early days 1990, there were also cafeteria.

>> Did you mean: During the early days, in 1990\'s there were also cafeterias.
but those who visited there were not a young men.

>> But those who go there were not young men.

>> OR: The people who go there weren\'t young.
The image of 90\'s cafeteria was represented by middle-age-people.

>> Did you mean: The image of the cafeterias in the 90\'s were represented by the middle aged people.
They talked to set their business.

>> Did you mean: They talked to close business deals.

>> OR: They talked to set business deals.

It was called \"Da-bang\"

>> Correct!
Many women who worked in Dabang was considered as obscene girl.

>> Many women who worked in Dabang were considered as n aobscene girl.
actually there were not fully wrong, becase most Dabang girl was repelled or ran out from their house.

>> Did you mean: Actually, they were not bad girls because most \"Dabang\" girls ran out of their houses.

so they didn\'t have any income.

>> Correct!

>> OR: So they didn\'t have any source of income.
But, In these days, the number of dabang is decreasing.

>> But these days, the number of \"Dabang\" is decreasing.

>> OR: Nowadays, the number of \"Dabang\" is decreasing.
Franchised coffee shops are increasing now like starbucks.

>> Correct! ( Starbucks ^^)
So the perception of coffee shop is change, that kinds of perception like Dabang is over now.

>> So the perception of coffee shop is changed, \'Dabang\" is over now.

>> OR: The perception about \"Dabang\" is over and the thoughts about coffee shops are continuously changing.

Many young men and women are visiting coffee shops in these days.

>> Many young men and women are visiting coffee shops these days.
because those coffee shops give room for talking and studying whatever you like.

>> It is because those coffee shops give a room for talks and studying.

>> OR: Coffee shops provide a place for discussion and studying.
Visiting coffeshop doesn\'t mean drink a cup of coffee, It means to take a rest in free time.

>> Visiting coffee shop doesn\'t mean drinking a cup of coffee, it means to take a rest during your free time,

>> OR: Going to coffee shop doesn\'t only mean drinking a cup of coffee but also to take a rest during your free time.