I think people make people a leader.
학생이 쓴 원문
I have learned that our society is a democratic society.
And it means that the citizen rule the society.
Recently I am studying the government administration subject.
The administration subject is a very dull and hard for me But I am keeping it up.
The summer is seem to come near.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Wee!
Thank you for doing your homework ^^
I hope you are having a great day.
Keep it up!
I have learned that our society is a democratic society.
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>> CORRECT
And it means that the citizen rule the society.
>> Also, it means that the citizens rule the society.
>> Also, it means that the citizens rule the society.
Recently I am studying the government administration subject.
>> I am recently studying the Government Administration subject.
>> I am recently studying the Government Administration subject.
The administration subject is a very dull and hard for me But I am keeping it up.
>> The administration subject is very dull and hard for me, but I am trying to keep it up.
>> The administration subject is very dull and hard for me, but I am trying to keep it up.
The summer is seem to come near.
>> Summer is coming.
>> Summer is coming.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
Bye.
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