I think people who collect insects or have them as pets are…
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I think people who collect insects or have them as pets are really great. Because it is about giving attention to insects that most people dislike and raising them, so I think they have courage and that kind of mind is cool. I think it would be nice to make friends with them so I don\'t have to be afraid of insects. Because if I\'m afraid of insects, they seem to protect me.
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Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
I think people who collect insects or have them as pets are really great.
>>> CORRECT!
Because it is about giving attention to insects that most people dislike and raising them, so I think they have courage and that kind of mind is cool.
>>> Because it is about giving attention to insects that most people dislike and raising them, I think they have courage and that kind of mind is cool.
I think it would be nice to make friends with them so I don\'t have to be afraid of insects.
>>> CORRECT!
Because if I\'m afraid of insects, they seem to protect me.
>>> CORRECT!
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