I think pronunciation is a problem that depends on effort.

2023-12-07 · 첨삭 강사 Cathy

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I think pronunciation is a problem that depends on effort. My pronunciation is also very bad, but it can be improved a lot by following lines in dramas or movies, reading news or reading books. So I think I\'m going to tell she/he how to write how to improve there\'s pronunciation.

강사 첨삭

Hi Da [이름], 

Great job on your homework! I appreciate your insights on pronunciation, and I want to tell you that your efforts are paying off—your pronunciation is good! Keep practicing with dramas, movies, news, and books; you\'re on the right track. 

~Teacher Cathy 

 

I think pronunciation is a problem that depends on effort. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>I think pronunciation is a problem that depends on your effort to be fixed. 

My pronunciation is also very bad, but it can be improved a lot by following lines in dramas or movies, reading news or reading books. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>My pronunciation is also not very good, but it can be improved significantly by following lines in dramas or movies, reading news, or reading books. 

So I think I\'m going to tell she/he how to write how to improve there\'s pronunciation. 

>>So I think I\'m going to tell them how to improve their pronunciation. 

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