I think, she is good to nominee!
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I think Park Geun-hye is better~
Her father was president, but he doesn't govern a state well.
So, Most people think, His daughter, Park Geun hye isn't going to govern a state well.
But It's no matter!! Because her father and her daughter is different! And than She served to other people with different nominee~
If she became president, it is woman president for the first time!!!
So I think Par Guen - Hye is better than other nominee!!
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I think Park Geun-hye is better~
>> I think, Park Geun-hye is the best among all the other candidates.
Her father was president, but he doesn\'t govern a state well.
>> Her father was a president, but he did not govern the state well.
So, Most people think, His daughter, Park Geun hye isn\'t going to govern a state well.
>> So most people think that his daughter, Park Geun-hye isn\'t govern the state well, too.
But It\'s no matter!! Because her father and her daughter is different!
>> But it does not matter because a father and a daughter are different!
And than She served to other people with different nominee~
>> And that she will serve the people as a different person, nominated by some other people.
If she became president, it is woman president for the first time!!!
>> If she will become the president, she is going to be the first female president in Korea!
So I think Par Guen - Hye is better than other nominee!!
>> So I think, Park Geun-hye is the best among all the nominees!
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