I think sometimes it is better not to tell the truth.

2014-01-21 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Yes, I think sometimes it is better not to tell the truth. People usually say this If there are inevitable death-patient, what should doctor say? I think it depands on the trait of personality. But main thought is better not to say the truth. If doctor tells the truth "you will die in 3 month.", the patient wouldn't live with passion or positive thinking. Here is the man who will meet his birth day and he is curious about a birth day party. In this situation, who will be the one to tell the truth. In this world, there are many lies. But It is not fair that these are thought as crime or fault. In the behind of surface, more higher call might be existed like doctor's lie, Friend's lie. What people will do, If tomorrow will never come? I think most of people commit crime. they don't care what he will pay. Chaos will come to us. So, sometimes it is better not to tell the truth.

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름],

Thank you for sending this in. ^^ I am so happy that even though it is already late at night.

You still find time to do your homework. Keep it up!

Please go over the corrections below and practice it. See you!

Teacher Nina


Yes, I think sometimes it is better not to tell the truth.

>> Correct!
People usually say this If there are inevitable death-patient, what should doctor say?

>> Did you mean: People usually say this \"If there are inevitable death-patient, what should the doctor say?\"

>> OR: There is a saying goes \"If there are inevitable death-patient, what should the doctor say?\"
I think it depands on the trait of personality.

>> Did you mean: I think it depends on the personality of the person.
But main thought is better not to say the truth.

>> But the main thought is, it is better not to say the truth.

>> OR: The main point is that, it is better not to tell the truth.
If doctor tells the truth \"you will die in 3 month.\", the patient wouldn\'t live with passion or positive thinking.
>> Did you mean: If the doctor tells the truth that, \" You will die in three months\". The patient wouldn\'t live with passion or with positive thinking.
Here is the man who will meet his birth day and he is curious about a birth day party.

>> There is a man who will celebrate his birthday soon and he is curious about his party.
In this situation, who will be the one to tell the truth.
>> Correct!
In this world, there are many lies.

>> Correct!

But It is not fair that these are thought as crime or fault. 

>> Did you mean: But it is not fair that these are considered as a crime or fault.
In the behind of surface, more higher call might be existed like doctor\'s lie, Friend\'s lie.

>> Did you mean: Behind the surface, a higher call might exist like a doctor\'s or a friend\'s lie. 
What people will do, If tomorrow will never come?

>> Correct! 

I think most of people commit crime. they don\'t care what he will pay.

>> Did you mean: I think most people commit crime that they don\'t care what will be the consequence.
>> OR: I think most people commit crime even if they don\'t know what will happen next. 

Chaos will come to us.

>> Correct! 

>> OR: Chaos will arise.
So, sometimes it is better not to tell the truth.

>> Correct! 

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