I think tha facing challenges improves me.

2017-01-17 · 첨삭 강사 Jacey

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Today subject is "Some people think that facing challenges imprves a person". I absolutely agree with that oppinion. I think that all most people don't think to impove something before when they feel to be lacking, me too. I'm facing challenge to improve my speaking in English since I have to work in UAE speaking the languge and I want to move to the better company for my better life.

강사 첨삭

Hello there, sir [이름]! ^.^

Happy Tuesday.


It\'s good to hear from you.

Thank you for taking the time to do your homework today. :)


I also agree that facing challenges improves a person.

With the help of challenges that we overcome everyday in our life, we become better and stronger.

We need these challenges in life to help us grow.


I am looking forward to seeing you again in class.

Enjoy the rest of your afternoon.

Take care! :)


--- Teacher Jacey :)



Today subject is \"Some people think that facing challenges imprves a person\".

>> Today\'s subject is \"Some people think that facing challenges improves a person.\"


I absolutely agree with that oppinion. 

>> I absolutely agree with that opinion.

>> OR : I strongly agree with that statement.


I think that all most people don\'t think to impove something before when they feel to be lacking, me too.

DID YOU MEAN :

>> I think that almost all people think to improve themselves when they feel that they are lacking something.

I\'m facing challenge to improve my speaking in English since I have to work in UAE speaking the languge and I want to move to the better company for my better life.

>> I\'m facing a challenge to improve my English speaking skills since I have to work here in UAE where it is required to speak English. I want to move to a better company for a better life.

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