I think that changes or new regulations are always challenge to someones\' life.
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> Why do you think most people are afraid of new regulations or changes
I think that changes or new regulations are always challenge to someones\' life. Because of that people feel uncomfortable.
People should adapt new changes and new regulations. Those should make people change their life style, pattern of life, and thrust of something important to their life.
And new regulations and changes change circumstance of someone\'s life. People can feel afraid because they can\'t expect or estimate exactly of their new life.
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Hello Sir JY. Thank you for this. Exactly! People don\'t want to feel inconvenienced or to live in a new environment. They want to continue doing what is comfortable for them and what they are used to.
- T. Beth
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I think that changes or new regulations are always challenge to someones\' life. >>>> I think that changes or new regulations are always challenging to someones\' life.
Because of that people feel uncomfortable.
>>>> correct (Because of that, people feel uncomfortable.)
People should adapt new changes and new regulations.
>>>> People should adapt to new changes and new regulations.
Those should make people change their life style, pattern of life, and thrust of something important to their life.
>>>> Those should make people change their lifestyle, pattern of life, and trust on something important in their lives.
And new regulations and changes change circumstance of someone\'s life.
>>>> correct
People can feel afraid because they can\'t expect or estimate exactly of their new life.
>>>> OR: People can feel afraid because they can\'t expect or estimate exactly how their life will change.
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