I think that compliment have a good affect to one\'s mind.
학생이 쓴 원문
How can a compliment affect one\'s state of mind?
I think that compliment have a good affect to one\'s mind.
Do you know this sentence? \"Compliment makes a whale to dance\". This sentence shows that compliment is very important to cheer up someone\'s mind.
And I think compliment is the easiest way to motivate someone without money. If you receive compliments from your boss It makes you work hard. It can be compensate tiring. In conclusion you can make a good results and as a results company is happy about good results. Moreover you might have a good feedback with some money.
I suggest that if you were leader you would give a compliment to your member frequently.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Sir JY. Yes, compliment does work wonders!
- T. Beth
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>>> I think that compliments have a good affect on one\'s mind.
Do you know this sentence? \"Compliment makes a whale to dance\".
>>> OR: A compliment makes a whale dance.
This sentence shows that compliment is very important to cheer up someone\'s mind.
>>> correct
And I think compliment is the easiest way to motivate someone without money.
And I think compliment is the easiest way to motivate someone without money.
>>> correct
If you receive compliments from your boss It makes you work hard.
>>> correct ( If you receive compliments from your boss, it makes you work hard. )
It can be compensate tiring.
>>> It can compensate for tiredness.
In conclusion you can make a good results and as a results company is happy about good results.
>>> In conclusion, you can make a good result and as a result, the company is happy about it.
Moreover you might have a good feedback with some money.
>>> Moreover, you might receive a good feedback with some money.
I suggest that if you were leader you would give a compliment to your member frequently.
>>> I suggest that if you were a leader you should give a compliment to your members frequently.
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