I think that current issue about the environmental-friendly products is energy.
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What do you think of producing more environmental-friendly products?
I think that current issue about the environmental-friendly products is energy.
For example in the past most of the energy is produced by fuel. But recently there are many ways to produce energy. If you visit EU counties you can see wind power plants easily.
And In Korea there is movement for reducing atomic plants. Atomic plants can produce very hazardous material for man. People aware importance of clean environment rapidly recently so that Korea government decides reducing the atomic plants. And Korea government decided that there is no more additional atomic plants in Korea.
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I think that current issue about the environmental-friendly products is energy.
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For example in the past most of the energy is produced by fuel.
For example in the past most of the energy is produced by fuel.
>>> correct
But recently there are many ways to produce energy.
>>> correct
If you visit EU counties you can see wind power plants easily.
>>> correct
And In Korea there is movement for reducing atomic plants.
And In Korea there is movement for reducing atomic plants.
>>> And In Korea, there is a movement for reducing atomic nuclear power plants.
Atomic plants can produce very hazardous material for man.
>>> OR: Nuclear power plants can produce very hazardous material for humans.
People aware importance of clean environment rapidly recently so that Korea government decides reducing the atomic plants.
>>> People are aware of the importance of clean environment recently so the Korean government decided on reducing the atomic plants.
And Korea government decided that there is no more additional atomic plants in Korea.
>>> And the Korean government decided that there will be no more additional atomic plants in Korea.
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