I think that it is good to endure anger as possible as.
학생이 쓴 원문
There are situations that I have to be anger. Even so, anger is not always right. Rather, enduring anger can be more scary to the other person. Especially for children. But I know it is not easy. And person who get angry easily can make other person be uncomfortable. So I try not to be that person. But, sometimes when I get hungry I used to be anger to my husband. ^^
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ju [이름]. I sorely missed your essays :) so this is much appreciated. Thank you for taking the time to answer the question and sharing your thoughts and experiences on the topic. I agree there are certain situations when the right kind of anger is appropriate but the wrong kind of anger could have a negative effect especially on the person who is angry. Enjoy the rest of the evening and have a good night! ~Jane c\",)
I think that it is good to endure anger as possible as.
>> I think that it is good to endure anger as long as possible.
There are situations that I have to be anger.
>> There are situations that I have to be angry.
Even so, anger is not always right.
>> CORRECT =)
Rather, enduring anger can be more scary to the other person.
>> Rather, enduring anger can be scarier to the other person.
Especially for children.
>> CORRECT =)
But I know it is not easy.
>> CORRECT =)
And person who get angry easily can make other person be uncomfortable.
>> And the person who gets angry easily can make the other person feel uncomfortable.
So I try not to be that person.
>> CORRECT =)
But, sometimes when I get hungry I used to be anger to my husband. ^^
>> But sometimes when I get hungry I used to be angry at my husband.
I think that it is good to endure anger as possible as.
>> I think that it is good to endure anger as long as possible.
There are situations that I have to be anger.
>> There are situations that I have to be angry.
Even so, anger is not always right.
>> CORRECT =)
Rather, enduring anger can be more scary to the other person.
>> Rather, enduring anger can be scarier to the other person.
Especially for children.
>> CORRECT =)
But I know it is not easy.
>> CORRECT =)
And person who get angry easily can make other person be uncomfortable.
>> And the person who gets angry easily can make the other person feel uncomfortable.
So I try not to be that person.
>> CORRECT =)
But, sometimes when I get hungry I used to be anger to my husband. ^^
>> But sometimes when I get hungry I used to be angry at my husband.
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