I think that it is not important whether it is long or not.
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How do you avoid a lengthy presentation?
I think that it is not important whether it is long or not. In my case when I make a presentation I would like to focus on transfer my message to others. And most of the cases I made a presentation which people can understand message without explanation only by presentation. That is my goal for making a presentation.
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Hello Sir JY. Thank you for this. I think that is the main purpose of a presentation, to relay the message or information to your audience.
- T. Beth
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I think that it is not important whether it is long or not. >>> correct
In my case when I make a presentation I would like to focus on transfer my message to others.
>>> OR: In my case, when I make a presentation I would like to focus on relaying my message to others.
And most of the cases I made a presentation which people can understand message without explanation only by presentation.
>>> And most of the cases, I have made a presentation where people can understand the message without explanation only by presentation.
That is my goal for making a presentation.
>>> correct
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