I think that people who do business should be able to use the Internet usefully.
학생이 쓴 원문
Homework: Internet networks such as SNS have brought efficient communication. We can easily communicate with our distant acquaintances and even our friends abroad by using the internnet. For over two years, I have been sharing my daily life with my friends both at home and abroad through Facebook and Instagram every day. Through these activities, I was able to meet many good friends and there were many business benefits as well. In particular, I think that people who do business should be able to use the Internet usefully.
Lesson remarks: In my opinion, the class focusing on the textbook was really helpful. Thank you for teaching me well.
Pray: God, I want to do well, but I often lack the ability and the will. Please help me do my job well. With your help, I believe I can do well. I pray in Jesus name. amen
강사 첨삭
Happy Friday, Elliot. Well done on your homework. I barely made any corrections ^^ And by the way, you are very much welcome. Let\'s keep studying English and get you to your goal by God\'s grace :) Thank you for your faith. I hope you have a good weekend with your family. Until the next class. ~Jane c\",
Homework:
Internet networks such as SNS have brought efficient communication.
>> CORRECT =)
We can easily communicate with our distant acquaintances and even our friends abroad by using the internet.
>> CORRECT =)
For over two years, I have been sharing my daily life with my friends both at home and abroad through Facebook and Instagram every day.
>> CORRECT =)
Through these activities, I was able to meet many good friends and there were many business benefits as well.
>> CORRECT =)
In particular, I think that people who do business should be able to use the Internet usefully.
>> CORRECT =)
OR >> In particular, I think that people who do business should be able to use the Internet productively.
Lesson remarks:
In my opinion, the class focusing on the textbook was really helpful.
>> CORRECT =)
OR >> In my opinion, focusing on the textbook in class was really helpful.
Thank you for teaching me well.
>> CORRECT =)
Pray:
God, I want to do well, but I often lack the ability and the will.
>> CORRECT =)
Please help me do my job well.
>> CORRECT =)
With your help, I believe I can do well.
>> CORRECT =)
I pray in Jesus name. amen
>> I pray in Jesus\' name. Amen.
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