I think that the most beautiful bird is ‘parrot’.
학생이 쓴 원문
No, I don’t think so.
I think that the most beautiful bird is ‘parrot’.
This bird’s fur is various color.
Especially, I like a bird that has rainbow color.
Also, this bird can copy a person’s words.
Therefore, I like parrot that has many charms.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kara!
Andrea
I think that the most beautiful bird is ‘parrot’.
>> I think that the most beautiful bird is the parrot.
Especially, I like a bird that has rainbow color.
Also, this bird can copy a person’s words.
Therefore, I like parrot that has many charms.
Thank you for sending your homework.
Parrot is also a beautiful bird.
Andrea
No, I don’t think so.
>> Correct
I think that the most beautiful bird is ‘parrot’.
>> I think that the most beautiful bird is the parrot.
This bird’s fur is various color.
>> This bird\'s feather has various color.
>> The bird has a colorful feather.
Especially, I like a bird that has rainbow color.
>> I especially like birds that have a rainbow color.
Also, this bird can copy a person’s words.
>> In addition, this bird can mimic a person talking.
Therefore, I like parrot that has many charms.
>> Therefore, I like charming parrots.
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