I think that there is big affection of family background of the way you see the world.
학생이 쓴 원문
ESSAY: How has your family background affected the way you see the world?
I think that there is big affection of family background of the way you see the world.
I believe that if you were growing up with positive circumstance family you can have positive thinking about the world. I think that opposite is either working as same as positive. I mean that if your father or mother has a positive thinking it can be influenced to their children.
I want to make my daughter has positive thinking about the world. So for her, I have to think about the world as positive because it can be influenced about the way she see the world.
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Thanks Sir JY! Good job! Take care!
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
I think that there is big influence of family background on the way we see the world.
>>> I think that there is a big affection of family\'s background of the way you see the world.
I believe that if you were growing up with positive circumstance family you can have positive thinking about the world.
I believe that if you were growing up with positive circumstance family you can have positive thinking about the world.
>>> I believe that if you are growing up with positive circumstance family, you can have a positive thinking about the world.
I think that opposite is either working as same as positive. I mean that if your father or mother has a positive thinking it can be influenced to their children.
>>> I think that opposite is either working positive. I mean, if your father or mother has a positive thinking it can influence their children.
I want to make my daughter has positive thinking about the world.
I want to make my daughter has positive thinking about the world.
>>> I want my daughter to have a positive thinking about the world.
So for her, I have to think about the world as positive because it can be influenced about the way she see the world.
>>> So for her, I have to think about the world as positive because it influenced the way she sees the world.
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