I think the appropriate punishment for cyber-bullying
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I think the appropriate punishment for cyber-bullying is a fine of 6 million won or more, or going to prison, depending on the degree. Because the punishment is weak, people don\'t mind cyber-bullying.
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Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
I think the appropriate punishment for cyber-bullying is a fine of 6 million won or more, or going to prison, depending on the degree.
>>> CORRECT!
Because the punishment is weak, people don\'t mind cyber-bullying.
>>> CORRECT!
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