I think the first impression is important to meet an unknown person especially.
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The first impression is affecting to overall evaluation of that person by others.
>> First impressions affect someone\'s overall evaluation of people.
When I had a blind date I write some note to prepare the salute words in case of meeting a girl who I meet for the first time.
>> When I had a blind date, I wrote some notes in case of meeting a girl for the first time.
It is not more meaningful to me as time goes by.
>> It isn\'t that meaningful to me now as time goes by.
But when I meet the girl for the first time it is regarded for me to so precious time thinking that I meet the girl who I will marry.
>> However, whenever I meet a girl for the first time, I also think about marrying her.
Anyway my comments are going to long while it has no meaning.
>> Anyway, my comments are going too long and it\'s meaningless.
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>> CORRECT
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