I think the first impression is important to meet an unknown person especially.

2019-02-14 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

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The first impression is affecting to overall evaluation of that person by others. When I had a blind date I write some note to prepare the salute words in case of meeting a girl who I meet for the first time. It is not more meaningful to me as time goes by. But when I meet the girl for the first time it is regarded for me to so precious time thinking that I meet the girl who I will marry. Anyway my comments are going to long while it has no meaning. Thanks for reading. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Wee!

Thank you so much for doing your homework ^^

I hope you are having a great night ☺


The first impression is affecting to overall evaluation of that person by others.

>> First impressions affect someone\'s overall evaluation of people.


When I had a blind date I write some note to prepare the salute words in case of meeting a girl who I meet for the first time.

>> When I had a blind date, I wrote some notes in case of meeting a girl for the first time.


It is not more meaningful to me as time goes by.

>> It isn\'t that meaningful to me now as time goes by.


But when I meet the girl for the first time it is regarded for me to so precious time thinking that I meet the girl who I will marry.

>> However, whenever I meet a girl for the first time, I also think about marrying her.


Anyway my comments are going to long while it has no meaning.
>> Anyway, my comments are going too long and it\'s meaningless.


Thanks for reading.
Bye.

>> CORRECT

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