I think the most important to learn something in life is to love another people

2020-11-04 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

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The love is having a lot of meaning love make us more happy and that is more bigger as much as we divide. and loving another people is most worth work in the world. so than I definitely say that the most important thing to learn in our life is learning a love to other people

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]!

Thank you for submitting your answer to me.
I think you\'re right. Learning to love other people is the most important thing since it will also evolve to kindness, care and respect towards others. ^^

By the way, use \'other\' when referring to people while \'another\' to a person. ^^

~Teacher Gina

I think the most important to learn something in life is to love another people
>> I think the most important thing to learn in life is to love other people.
The love is having a lot of meaning
>> Love has a lot of meaning.
love make us more happy and that is more bigger as much as we divide.
>> Love makes us happier and it becomes bigger as much as we divide.
and loving another people is most worth work in the world.
>> And loving other people is the most worthy work in the world.
so than I definitely say that the most important thing to learn in our life is learning a love to other people
>>  So I definitely say that the most important thing to learn in our life is learning to love other people.

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