I think the most overrated holiday is…

2023-01-26 · 첨삭 강사 Tricia

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I think the most overrated holiday is Chuseok. Actually, since I am a student, I have no choice but to enjoy Chuseok, but compared to other holidays, Chuseok doesn\'t mean much. Even adults don\'t think about the meaning of Chuseok. It seems like a lot of days off compared to the meaning. But I like my days off, so I hope Chuseok continues.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)

~ Teacher Tricia

I think the most overrated holiday is Chuseok. 
>>> CORRECT!

Actually, since I am a student, I have no choice but to enjoy Chuseok, but compared to other holidays, Chuseok doesn\'t mean much. 
>>> CORRECT!

Even adults don\'t think about the meaning of Chuseok. 
>>> CORRECT!

It seems like a lot of days off compared to the meaning. 
>>> CORRECT!

But I like my days off, so I hope Chuseok continues.
>>> CORRECT!

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