I think the owner have responsibility to clean up the sidewalks.
학생이 쓴 원문
There are many things which we don't want to do.
Most of that things are charged with government officers.
City plumber or street cleaner is one of them who have to do dirty and difficult and dangerous jop called 3Ds.
As officer, I appreciate that I get a salary from my country, from my citizens and City cleaner, of course, He/she also appreciate with that as I do.
but that isn't mean that he/she have to clean all of trash or something including snow.
Having private land means that Owner have a right to do with the land as his will, but also means that he have responsibility to clean up or tidy up the land, If there are some dangerous factors existed.
in case of the accident owner have to clean the side walks.
It is the same case that a owner of dog should compensate to injury, when his dog bite stroller.
강사 첨삭
Hi there! I hope you are having a good day!
How was your Christmas?
Great job with the composition. There are just some minor grammar slips but your point was made very clear.^^
I do agree with you on this. The same rule applies here in our country.
I\'m looking forward to talk with you soon! I expect that you have some good stories to share about your Christmas.^^
~T. Nina~
There are many things which we don\'t want to do.
>> There are many things that we don\'t want to do.Most of that things are charged with government officers.
>> Most of those things are handled by government officers.
City plumber or street cleaner is one of them who have to do dirty and difficult and dangerous jop called 3Ds.
>> City plumbers and street cleaners are examples of those who have to do the dirty, difficult, and dangerous job referred to as 3Ds. As officer, I appreciate that I get a salary from my country, from my citizens and City cleaner, of course, He/she also appreciate with that as I do.
>> As an officer, I appreciate that I get a salary from my country and from my citizens, and the city cleaners, of course, appreciate that too. but that isn\'t mean that he/she have to clean all of trash or something including snow.
>> But that doesn\'t mean that he/she has to clean all of the trash and other things including snow.Having private land means that Owner have a right to do with the land as his will, but also means that he have responsibility to clean up or tidy up the land, If there are some dangerous factors existed.
>> Having a private land means the owner has the right to do anything with the land as he wills, but it also means that he has the responsibility to clean up the land if there exist some dangerous factors.
in case of the accident owner have to clean the side walks.
>> In case of an accident, the owner has to clean the sidewalks.
It is the same case that a owner of dog should compensate to injury, when his dog bite stroller.
>> It is the same case that a dog owner should compensate for an injury when his dog bites a passerby.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.